Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Raymond Carver said that revision was the best part of writing. I wouldn't go that far, but it's actually a lot of fun. I understand why people suggest waiting a few months before diving into revisions. You approach it cold-blooded, as if it's a piece of writing by someone else. Then you just change it as you read it.

I started with a manuscript of almost 90,000 words. I'm halfway through a comprehensive line edit and it's down to 77,000. And everything I've taken out has made it better. I've dropped two bad characters, streamlined a bad plot development, and made the dialogue a lot less grating. Plus, with all that baggage gone, it moves a bit faster, which is always good in a commercial piece.

I don't know what the future of the book is, but I'm stoked to have something I'm proud enough of to want to make better. Revision is hard work, but it's like sanding a wood sculpture in that you see the shape of the thing emerge.

Kerouac was a fool.

2 comments:

Harry Tournemille said...

Sam, it's nothing short of outstanding that you've gotten so much done on your novel.

Hope you get to take it to SIWC some time and pitch it to an agent. Something that polished should get picked up.

Sam said...

I want to go to the Writer's conference this year. It all depends if I can dredge up the hundreds of dollars necessary for admission.

Are you going?