Friday, May 28, 2010

I'm posting over at gutbucket.tumblr.com . I seem to write better posts in the tumblr forum, and get more exposure, and have a better time interacting, and piss more people off. There's something about blogspot which grates on my nerves. I don't really want to deal with comments, but I also think it's dishonest to arbitrate them. Tumblr's system of reblogging and asking questions just works for me.

I'm also probably going to leave Facebook soon. Security concerns, but also the inanity of the comments. I don't care that you made tea, or that your niece ate a grape. And if social networking is the future of marketing, I'm happy to forego that revenue. And the fucking games, man. "Dean has requested your help slaying orcs in the forest of Nebularr." "Suzie would like you to till her farm." Really?


Saturday, May 15, 2010

The Hero's Journey: Not to be confused with Screenwriting By Numbers



I owe my old writing prof Ross Laird something of an apology.

One of Ross's key idea was the importance of myth to contemporary writing. We spent a lot of time on the Hero's Journey, and he mentioned Joseph Campbell a number of times. Campbell is the author of Hero With a Thousand Faces, a book which argues that the similarities between myth, legend, fairy tale and religious parable point to a "monomyth." In other words, all stories tell the same basic, universal story. It's an idea which influenced George Lucas and the Matrix guys, and many many others, especially in Hollywood.

Most people (writers anyway) come to the Hero's Journey not from Campbell's book, but from a book called The Writer's Journey by Christopher Vogler. Vogler takes Campbell's work and forms it into an outline that all screenplays (he suggests) follow. You're probably familiar with the various steps and archetypes: Call to Adventure, Refusal of the Call, Meeting with the Mentor, Battle with the Threshold Guardian, etc.

Now, my pitiful attempts at screenwriting did or didn't fall into that pattern, but I never found it useful in writing. It's like the saying "Every story has a beginning, middle and end." It sounds profound, is undoubtedly true, but gives you no help in creating a story, any more than saying "A Frankenstein has a head, a trunk and feet.*" It's sententious horse pockey.

I've found that going back to the original book is always invaluable, and is the only way to scoop any original insight. So I read Hero With a Thousand Faces, and now I understand the value of the monomyth, and exactly where Vogler goes wrong.

What Campbell describes isn't structure but purpose. The Journey is about the many ways that these aspects of the myth promote or hide their adherence to the monomyth. For instance, the Refusal of the Call in Vogler is a time early on when the hero tries to turn away from the quest but can't. In Campbell, the Refusal might be a myth unto itself, as in the myth of King Minos. Minos refuses to relinquish his throne, denying the gods their sacrifice. Thus he becomes a tyrant, and his wife gives birth to a Minotaur. That myth is almost entirely Refusal; Vogler turns it into a stepping stone.

Here's Campbell:


And here's Vogler:

(borrowed from wondering-mind.blogspot.com )

It's not a matter of "My story has to have these steps," but instead, "Chances are my story will emphasize some or most (or one) of these steps."

See the difference? See where everyone goes wrong? The same watering-down happens to any major thinker's work, from Freud to Jesus. Doubtless it will happen to mine.

As I started by saying, I owe Ross Laird an apology. I rejected outright what Vogler had to say, but should have given Campbell a chance a bit sooner.

The value of Campbell is not in an outline, but in the insight that the story a writer is trying to tell has been told before—and needs to be told again. To some people that insight could be worthless, another half-baked idea to rail against as you write a story with "no places, no spaces, no races" and try to be "experimental" (read: deliberately boring, but couched in enough Lacanian jargon that anyone who calls you on your shit "just doesn't understand" or is too "bourgeois". Die in a fire, buddy.).

One valuable thing from Vogler, which David Mamet also repeats, is the similarity between the journey of the hero/protagonist and that of the writer. I find this especially comforting, knowing that the doubts and indecisions one encounters as a writer mimic those faced by one's characters.

It would be interesting and useful, I think, to apply Campbell's journey to ALL one's characters, and note how each emphasizes different aspects of the journey. To me that's a much more interesting use than as an outline. I'm not anti-outline, I just believe they should be generated by the material, not grafted on externally. Writing is not stencilling, there's no set template, and it wouldn't be worth doing if there was.

Campbell's work has a spiritual overtone that pure academics won't be comfortable with, but it should be read and returned to. Vogler's book should prove an interesting appendix, NOT a popular summary. Campbell's book offers an understanding of the comparative skeletons of cultural fictions. Vogler's book offers the chance to earn Matrix money. That's valuable too, but it's meant to appeal to a different demographic, one eager for a formula. There ain't no formula.


* And before some asshole points out that the monster isn't called Frankenstein, the Doctor is: the whole story is about parenthood, about a man who creates life. Mary Shelley suffered a miscarriage shortly before writing it. What better name for the creation than its father's? If anything, "The Monster" is the truly misleading moniker, because it downplays the putative humanity of the creation, which is the center of the book's philosophy.

Thursday, May 13, 2010

Another odd fish I learnt about is the northern cavefish. It's totally blind due to the fact that it lives in dark caves and has no use for its eyes, so nature just decided to make it blind. I felt like I didn't need my eyes on my holiday to Lanzarote. Every trip I went on involved looking into volcanoes, which were that dark that you couldn't see anything, so what's the point. There is a famous quote that goes, "In the kingdom of the blind, the one-eyed man is king." If there were a kingdom of the blind, Lanzarote is where they should live. They'd be missing nothing.

It's an odd saying, though. If I lived in the kingdom of the blind, I'd just tell them I was the one with the working eye. Be hard to be proved wrong. If they didn't fall for that, I'd suggest that a blind man should be king as he'll have our interests at heart, whereas the fella with an eye wouldn't. If I didn't get the king's job I'd be the kingdom's window cleaner. Money for nothing.

Karl Pilkington. I can't wait until he's old and famous enough to start getting honorary doctorates.

Sunday, May 9, 2010

Swintec, the official typewriter of the US Federal Penal System

From the Swintec website:
"With its Crystal clear cabinet and its 128,000 character storage memory, the 2416DM 128K CC is specifically designed for use by inmates incarcerated in correctional facilities."

The website reminds buyers specify the right memory size, to make sure it won't be "rejected at the facility property room." How fucking cool is a typewriter built to be used in jail? And it's see-through!

Alphasmart ain't got shit on Swintec.

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Grear Writing VI: All the King's Men

So I pulled the sun screen down and squinted and put the throttle to the floor. And kept on moving west. For West is where we all plan to go some day. It is where you go when the land gives out and the old-field pines encroach. It is where you go when you get the letter saying: Flee, all is discovered. It is where you go when you look down at the blade in your hand and the blood on it. It is where you go when you are told that you are a bubble on the tide of empire. It is where you go when you hear that thar's gold in them-thar hills. It is where you go to grow up with the country. It is where you go to spend your old age. Or it is just where you go.

It was just where I went.

Robert Penn Warren, All the King's Men.

As much as I bitch about grad school--and I bitch constantly--I still very much want to teach literature. I think there's value in reading great writing and discussing great writing and delving into difficult books. Literature won't save your soul or make you a better person, but it can preserve and stoke the part of your brain that says, "There's more to it than this. There are things I still need to understand and contemplate."

Anyway, that's why I bother.

Robert Penn Warren is associated with Cleanth Brooks, the head of the New Criticism movement. New Criticism is out of favour now, which means that Warren, a three-time Pulitzer winner and Poet Laureate, isn't read much. It's a shame, because his poetry is brilliant, and I'm enjoying his fiction even more.

I'm two-thirds through All the King's Men. After a slow start it takes off. It was written within a year of Citizen Kane, and it has the same king of back-and-forth structure, which makes me wonder if Warren and Orson Welles were aware of each other.

Warren became a mentor to David Milch, and there's definitely an influence apparent, especially in how Warren works metaphysical and philosophical discussions into the thoughts and words of flesh-and-blood characters.

The first film adaptation of All the King's Men was with Broderick Crawford in 1949. It was remade a few years ago--because Hollywood ran out of original thoughts, and seems in danger of running out of secondhand ones--with Sean Penn in the lead. It can be hard to imagine a character as he or she is described once that book has been turned into a film. I can't think of Tom Joad without seeing Henry Fonda in my mind's eye. But even though I started with Penn in mind, Willie Stark really came into his own once I hit page fifty. Not that the description is excessive or even prevalent in the book, but Stark and Burden and the other characters seem fully-formed. They have a psychological integrity that makes them themselves, in the way Lear is only himself, or Victor Frankenstein, or even Hannibal Lector. There are certain depths that movies and tv cannot penetrate, depths that belong only to fiction. And isn't that fucking swell for those of us still marginally literate?